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Broken trust by ~DarkAngelOfLov:iconDarkAngelOfLov:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


My heads full of anger
My hearts full of pain
I thought I could trust you
But my trust was in vain

You told my secret
Now every one knows
And inside my heart
The hate grows and grows

I don’t know who to trust now
You were the first
That I trusted with my heart
You have no idea how this hurts

But I will be okay
I’ll start anew
And I’ll know in the future
Not to put my trust in you

So forget your apology
And the reasons you told
If you’ve forgotten
It was my secret you sold

So if you’re reading this
Be careful who you trust yourself to
Because the next person to be betrayed
Could very well be you
©2006-2009 ~DarkAngelOfLov
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Author's Comments

This is what happened to me over the weekend, I was pretty pissed off at this prson (who will remain unnamed) so I wrote this, I felt better after I put it this to paper, but I'm still pretty pissed now. :anger: Sooo anyway, tell me what you think, or not ^^

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=YellowRibbons Jun 25, 2006, 5:00:21 PM
o0o0o.. that gave me a chills.
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~DarkAngelOfLov Jun 25, 2006, 5:01:04 PM
thank you ^^

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~heyyou767 Jun 25, 2006, 5:02:44 PM
You misspelled "hart" it's "heart" and in "..forget you apology.." 'you' should be 'your'. But otherwise a great poem! I LOVE it! (can relate)
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~DarkAngelOfLov Jun 25, 2006, 5:30:31 PM
@__@ thought I fixed that >.< I'll do that now, thanks for the comment!

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*Emotional-Writings Jun 26, 2006, 5:42:35 AM
thanks for submitting to the contest:)!! (Spread the news to other members!!)

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~deafield Jun 26, 2006, 8:15:03 AM
man*woman* i know how you feel. I'v been betrayed so many times in my life by people i thought were my friends and now i will never be able to trust anyone fully again because i let the feeling get to me.dont let that happen to you. find friends you knwo you can trust and dont think about the betrayals...i hate the idea of people going through what i do...that was a wonderful poem and stuff liek that shows that good can come from the bad.


dea

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~DarkAngelOfLov Jun 26, 2006, 4:27:56 PM
Tahnk you for the comment and fav, I know, I already have friends I KNOW I can trust, what's sad about this is that it was a famliy member -_-

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You laugh because I'm different. I laugh because your all the same :blackrose:

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~DarkAngelOfLov Jun 26, 2006, 4:28:12 PM
welcome! k I will!

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~nero-angelo-tala Jun 26, 2006, 4:34:29 PM
i soo feel u i feel that way too wow.... well just so u know or to jog your memory you have a place in my pack and u can Always talk to me cause remember u my BIG SISSY :glomp: :heart:

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