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Play me a song by ~DarkAngelOfLov:iconDarkAngelOfLov:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed


Play me a song
Make it one of love
Make the notes high
Make them soar like doves

Play me a song
Make it break my heart
With it’s sweet melody
Make it tear me apart

Play me a song
That’ll have me in tears
By the time it’s over with
I will live out my fears

Play me a song
That’ll lull me to sleep
Just like those fake promises
You promise you’ll keep

Play me a song
That says you’ll never leave
Make the keys sing
So I can’t tell you deceive

Play me a song
Play me a beautiful lie
Make it convincing enough
So I won’t have to say goodbye
©2007-2009 ~DarkAngelOfLov
:icondarkangeloflov:

Author's Comments

It just came to me. I wrote it in like five minutes. But I like it anyway. Comments welcome!

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~your-reject May 16, 2007, 4:26:17 PM
I like the sudden turn. It goes from like, all loving and sweet to calling the person a liar. =]
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~noodle-soup May 16, 2007, 7:44:39 PM
I like it too =]

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And Its Not So Much That Im Here Without You,
Its That Im Here Without Me.
:icondarkangeloflov:
~DarkAngelOfLov May 17, 2007, 8:06:36 PM
thanks!

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If Barbie married Mickey mouse they could take over the world! ~ my Mama!

If you love something let it go, or cripple it so it can't get away ~ Van
:icondarkangeloflov:
~DarkAngelOfLov May 17, 2007, 8:07:45 PM
lol, yeah I like this one myself ^^ thank you ^^

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If Barbie married Mickey mouse they could take over the world! ~ my Mama!

If you love something let it go, or cripple it so it can't get away ~ Van
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~VampireLoverClub May 18, 2007, 10:30:26 AM
cool...thank you for joining the club...*bow*
:icondarkangeloflov:
~DarkAngelOfLov May 18, 2007, 12:52:06 PM
...okay XD

--
If Barbie married Mickey mouse they could take over the world! ~ my Mama!

If you love something let it go, or cripple it so it can't get away ~ Van
:iconvampireloverclub:
~VampireLoverClub May 18, 2007, 2:12:21 PM
^_^ you rule...keep up the good work...*hug*
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~deafield May 19, 2007, 12:14:39 PM
I like this one a lot too. The only grammer-like mistake is in the line"Make it tare me apart" which tare is actually "tear"...one little correction and this poem will be Perfecto!

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I'm a Edward Scissorhands fan. Plain and simple.

I even wrote a fan-fiction novel about him-[link]
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